Somehow I would like to thank you my friend for spending so much time and tried so hard to understand some of my stupid posts that not written in english (of course I wrote every posts in english but in broken term).
4 more days to my annual reservist. I have a lot of things have to pack this time round. And I am going to get more foods on this sunday. I will be able to talk cock sing song with all my old buddies soon.
2 comments:
Good luck with your training! Train hard & be safe! 4 more days to go, hopefully still got more blogs to read :)
1) complain is a verb... so you cannot say a complain... shld use complaint instead, which is a noun.. or you can change the whole sentence to "One of my close friend complained that my blog..."
2) "spend more time on correct my grammar" ... shld use "correcting" instead..
got a few more, but teacher here busy at work... haha.. pls check...
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